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How to make your end of year messages count (with templates)

Seven tips and three ready-to-use templates for an end of year message that builds trust, not eye-rolls.
James Blair
Communications Consultant
December 11, 2023
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A good end of year message from your leaders can do more for trust than a year of all-staff emails. A bad one can undo it.

Here at Guru HQ, we are big champions of a meaningful end-of-year message. The value for employees of hearing from their most senior leader(s) is easily, and all-too-often, underestimated. Even if the year has been a tough one for your organisation (and it has been a tough one for many!) and even if the outlook is uncertain or less rosy than you’d like, we still believe that sharing an honest, reflective, balanced, and empathetic message is the right thing to do.

We know that (perceived) poor communication from the top is a key factor in damaged trust in leadership. And that is something to be avoided at all costs.

If you haven’t yet finalised your end-of-year messaging, here are a lucky seven tips from us on getting it right, followed by three templates you can adapt.

1. Be transparent

If things haven’t been great this year, your people will already know this. Trying to put too much positive spin on a challenging 12 months will come across as either insincere or delusional. If operations have been trimmed and/or colleagues have lost their jobs, it can even be insulting.

Of course, the wins should be celebrated (as per our next point) but these should not be the only part of your message if they were not the only part of your story. Be transparent, be honest, and save yourself the hideous task of trying to rewrite your recent history to suit a false narrative. Your message will go further and be much better received if it acknowledges the challenges that you have been through or continue to face. After all, dealing with the challenges, along with any mistakes or failures, shows your adaptability and resilience.

2. Shout about the good stuff

You will absolutely have some positives to shout about, no matter how tough the year. If they’re not immediately obvious, look harder! Or, better still, involve your other leaders and managers to mine for the nuggets of motivational gold. Acknowledging and celebrating the wins, the team efforts, the positive customer feedback, the peer-to-peer recognitions, the problems solved, and the anniversaries will motivate and invigorate. Focus the narrative around the wins on the people involved, the people at every level where possible, to show your employees how valuable (and valued) they are, and remind them of how they contribute to the overall success of the business. A sense of belonging and a sense of worth are hugely valuable to our workers in the 2020s.

Focus the narrative around any wins on the people involved to show your employees how valuable (and valued) they are.

3. Show empathy

I’ve written a few times about how leaders do not need to be devoid of emotion and oblivious to struggle to appear strong and in control. It’s quite the opposite, in fact. The cold stiff upper-lip approach is as dated and unwelcome as it sounds. Leading and communicating with some vulnerability and plenty of emotional honesty and empathy can be incredibly powerful, especially when the message is a mixed bag of good and less-good news.

4. Show your face

Nothing will convey your empathy, your understanding, your sincerity, and your authenticity like showing your face. This is where a short video message can run rings around even a brilliantly composed written message. You’ll want to script it carefully, sure, but provided you believe in the words and the sentiment (and you don’t read it AI-chat-bot-style!), it will be a lot easier and a lot more impactful to share your words with the pacing, intonation, facial expressions, and body language that the written word doesn’t allow.

5. Show your gratitude

You may have already done this as part of point 2, but it can be all-too-easy to forget to actually thank people when you’re focusing so hard on what key messages you need to deliver and how. If you know it’s been a tough year for people, thank them for their service, their loyalty, their hard work, and their dedication. Depending on the size and shape of your organisation, you might want to thank some individuals as well as wider teams or departments. Thank those who have made specific contributions, shown unique skills, or really gone the extra mile for the business. Remember that not all contributions are intellectual or result directly in traditionally measured outcomes.

6. Look forward

Share where the organisation is heading next year: the vision, the priorities and the opportunities. Then make it personal. Tell people how their work will help get you there. When January comes, our guide to start-of-year comms picks up the story.

7. Offer your warm wishes

And finally, of course, please close your message with a warm and sincere wish for the holidays and the new year, expressing hope for continued success and growth as well as health and happiness. If you have a very diverse workforce, personalise the greeting carefully so as not to offend. “Happy holidays” is the safest bet, and neatly covers all end-of-year religious celebrations, but there is no harm in offering a “Merry Christmas to those who celebrate it” (or similar) as well.

End of year message templates you can copy

Adapt the words in square brackets. Each one works as an email, an intranet post or the script for a short video.

Template 1: after a good year

Hi everyone,

Before we all take a well-earned break, I want to say thank you. This year we [biggest achievement], and that happened because of you.

A few moments stood out for me: [team or person] [what they did], and [team or person] [what they did]. Those are just two of hundreds of examples I could have picked.

Next year we are focusing on [priority 1] and [priority 2]. I will share more in January, and I would love to hear your ideas.

Whatever you are celebrating, I hope you get proper time to rest with the people who matter to you. Happy holidays.

[Name]

Template 2: after a tough year

Hi everyone,

It has been a hard year, and I am not going to pretend otherwise. [Name the challenge plainly], and I know it has been felt across the business.

What I have seen is how people responded. [Specific example of teams pulling together.] That tells me we have what we need to get through what comes next.

Next year, our priority is [one clear priority]. I will be honest with you about how we are doing, good news and bad, and you can ask me anything at [channel or event].

Thank you for everything you have given this year. I hope you get a proper break. Happy holidays.

[Name]

Template 3: from a team manager

Hi team,

Quick one before the break. Thank you. This year we [team achievement], and I am proud of how we did it: [one thing about how the team worked].

A special mention to [name] for [specific thing], and to [name] for [specific thing].

In January we will kick off with [first priority]. Until then, switch off, rest and enjoy it. See you in the new year.

[Name]

Frequently asked questions

What should an end of year message to employees include?

A genuine thank you, an honest look back at the year, a few specific examples of people’s work, a short look ahead, and warm wishes for the break.

How long should an end of year message be?

Short enough to read on a phone in under two minutes: around 200 to 300 words, or a video of one to two minutes.

Should it be an email or a video?

Both work. A short video feels more personal, and a written version makes sure people who cannot watch still get it.

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