Case study · Internal tone of voice

A voice for the people who work there

Electricity North West had a brand voice built for customers and regulators. We gave them one for talking to colleagues, drawn from thirty three of them and written to be used rather than filed.

Client
Electricity North West
Service
Internal tone of voice
Sector
Energy networks
The challenge

Most tone of voice guides stop at the front door

Nearly every organisation has a tone of voice. It is written for customers, regulators and the public, and it is usually well looked after.

What it rarely does is tell an internal communicator how to write to a colleague. The result is a company that sounds like one thing to the outside world and something else entirely on the inside.

Electricity North West wanted to close that gap, so the company sounded like the same company in both directions. That meant starting with the people who would have to write it and read it.

A strong external voice with no internal counterpart
Colleagues spread across offices, depots and the field
Writers across seven business areas, each with their own habits
No shared answer to what good looks like
The brief

Adapt the voice they had, do not invent a new one

Take the external brand voice as the starting point and work out what it means when the audience is a colleague rather than a customer.

Build the answer from what people across the business actually said, not from what the comms team assumed.

And make it a working tool. Something a manager could open on the morning they have something difficult to write, find the bit they need, and get on with it.

What we did

We asked the business, then did the hard part

01

Ran six workshops in two days

Thirty three colleagues from Comms, HR, DSO, Engineering, Operations, Regulation and Compliance, and Finance and Business Services. Small groups, so quieter voices were heard as well as confident ones.

02

Made it easy to be honest

Group discussion, Teams chat and live Vevox polling running side by side, so people could answer out loud or anonymously depending on the question. That mix is why the data was worth having.

03

Found the pattern and reported back

A findings summary went to the business inside two weeks, setting out where the group agreed, where it split, and which of those differences actually mattered.

04

Landed on four principles

Helpful, Genuine, Straightforward and Respectful. Each one checked against the existing brand guidelines, so the internal voice extended the external one rather than competing with it.

05

Wrote a guide built to be used

Thirty two pages, interactive, so writers could jump to the situation in front of them. Worked examples, the awkward cases and the grey areas writers regularly encounter, made clear.

06

Handed over the keys

Amends through March, then an editable version handed across so the guide could keep growing with the business instead of dating the day we left.

The outcome

Four principles, agreed by the people who use them

Principle 1
Helpful
Principle 2
Genuine
Principle 3
Straightforward
Principle 4
Respectful
The work

What it took

6
workshops across two days
33
colleagues shaped the voice
7
business areas represented
32
page interactive guide, built to be used
Why we did it this way

In our words

“Asking people what they want is easy. Finding the one voice that fits all thirty three answers, and making it practical enough to use on a Tuesday morning, is the work.”
Paul Heaton, The Comms Guru
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